STAR FOX - Lylat Legacy Official Finalized Pages [027-028]
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We’re back! Continuing to update every Monday, as long as we’re not on any kind of break!
Also wantin’ to take the time to promo some other comic work, starting this week with a project brought to my attention called “Rat Rage”.
The guy bringin’ it over there’s put some real heart and soul into this, so if what you see here’s up your alley like it kinda was ours, we recommend you give it a read here!
"You punks are nobody" - That alone makes these pages 12/10.
That transition between present and flashback felt sudden, Fox’s voice is a nice cue but visually there’s nothing indicating we are witnessing events of the past (this is a good opportunity to develop a style of your own, I’ve seen comics making flashback black and white, panels with washed out colors, special outlines, etc.) except the fact that Fox is probably gonna narrate bits of whats about to happen. Vision and clarity in a comic are very important stuff.
And I see our similarities in our interpretation of Slippy Toad ends here, I’m a more of a supporter of the japanese background headcanon of him because it makes a bit more sense: Slippy being an only child from a widowed father he was probably a sheltered kid, with a famous and busy dad who probably overprotected him because of his mother’s death (another opportunity to develop Beltino was also kinda lost).
So, I don’t see Slippy being this strong of a character from the get go, I appreciate it of course, but he’s getting too ahead of himself so soon having no room for further development later on. But maybe that can change and you guys can surprise me.
I like his new interpretation, tho, he will probably have to work double to earn his place and respect among his friends and other people, but I see he looks like he’s a strong determinator this time around, can’t wait to see how his personality unfolds later on the story.